Bloody Hard

Great.

So I have a fantastic idea for a character and a setting and a rudimentary plot.

I can't get the first 300 words to work worth a damn. I'd really like to master a decent hook.

I've managed to write for years without actually mastering the craft. Turning towards more commercial works from bits I've composed for myself is a bit harder than I would have thought. My editing is however improving. It now is at the same level as that held by a drunken squirrel.

Off for the next fifty openings.